Piece Comment

Review of Jaron's Story of Coming Out

First off, I'd like to say the message in this piece is great. It shows how a family can accept someone's way of life instead of shunning it like most. Also the message of how someone can stay strong against those who seek to bring others down is powerful.

The only problem I had with this was at some points, mostly in the beginning, it was hard to hear his voice over the music. Besides that, the music was fitting, although the lyrics might have taken attention away under his voice.

All in all, a well done piece, and it deserves to be heard.