This story does a great job of keeping the listener engaged. The tone, cadence and music are wonderfully edited together - and kept me listening intently. The use of the cell door closing also was used to great effect - making me jump in my chair the first time.

The length, just shy of 8 minutes, makes this pieces eligible for dropping into a news magazine or local program. It has a good narrative and also is a colorful way to set up a call-in program or talk show discussion.

Nicely done!