It's rare to hear young people as involved in politics as you. I think it's excellent you could do this story and I liked hearing about your unique position as a first time voter. You have a very good, clear, and steady voice, which was easy to follow. Moreover you were short, sweet, and to the point. You explicitly voiced your issues and what you want done. Every youth should do a story like this for their officials to hear! It may even inspire other youth to get more politically active and discover how politics affect them.