Your voice is crystal clear and steady on this piece. Your levels are totally awesome too! The purpose of your story is made quite clear at the beginning and I simply love it. You got to talk to people from lots of different settings where icebreakers are used and you got sound clips of them (very important). The only thing I suggest you work on is a few of the transitions with music and people's voices. I can tell this story was well thought out, because organizationally it makes sense. Congrats on an amazing piece. I hope to hear more!
Review of How To Deal With Ice Breakers
Andre Rosario
Posted on September 13, 2006 at 02:24 PM
Your voice is crystal clear and steady on this piece. Your levels are totally awesome too! The purpose of your story is made quite clear at the beginning and I simply love it. You got to talk to people from lots of different settings where icebreakers are used and you got sound clips of them (very important). The only thing I suggest you work on is a few of the transitions with music and people's voices. I can tell this story was well thought out, because organizationally it makes sense. Congrats on an amazing piece. I hope to hear more!