I can directly identify with this story (at least as it relates to facebook, which is another networking website like myspace), which is why it left me wanting to hear more. Your story was a bit short and ended a bit abruptly. I think you could have talked a little more about the phenomnenon your dad dubbed "space invaders." Perheaps you could have even gotten a clip of the conversation with your dad, or maybe some of your friends who have experienced "space invasion." Your voice and style of narration is very real as it felt like you were talking to me! Keep up the good work!
Review of (My)Space Invaders
Andre Rosario
Posted on September 13, 2006 at 02:10 PM
I can directly identify with this story (at least as it relates to facebook, which is another networking website like myspace), which is why it left me wanting to hear more. Your story was a bit short and ended a bit abruptly. I think you could have talked a little more about the phenomnenon your dad dubbed "space invaders." Perheaps you could have even gotten a clip of the conversation with your dad, or maybe some of your friends who have experienced "space invasion." Your voice and style of narration is very real as it felt like you were talking to me! Keep up the good work!