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Review of Fashion Obsession


This piece offers a completely new perspective on fashion concerns. For me, the most fascinating parts of the story have to do with the question of why. Why does fashion consume so much of the producer?s time and energy? Why do people choose to spend so much on their clothing and appearance? Personal anecdotes about the producer and her mother add depth to the story. With some additional editing for conciseness and specificity, this piece would be excellent.