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Review of John Moe and the Chocolate Factory


Reference to a local show and host who recently visited a chocolate shop...with sound from the visit (plus music from Willy Wonka in back?) -- premise of spot is to "continue the adventure."
It's ok...but I didn't get a real adventerous feel from the soundbite. Maybe different language (something other than "adventure.") would have connected the dots a little better.