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Review of Southwest Side Stories: Midnight in the Garden of Villanueva

Great sounds! That sound of breaking glass in the beginning is truly attention grabbing. But your story is a bit hard to understand. Don?t worry it happens to the best of us! Often times when we do radio stories we assume the listener knows everything! So we leave important details and definitions out, often time leaving the listener (in this case) me confused. The situation you were looking at in your piece, the old guy doing something with a stick (that was another part that was confusing) sounded so amusing, and I smelled the aroma you described steaming out of the boiling pot. COOL DESCRIPTIONS IN AND OUT OF YOUR WHOLE PIECE!!! I think that?s all I will focus on, great job man!