Excellent narration Gloria. I really was into your story. Every moment I was waiting to hear your response to Julio. I was very sad after hearing the story and I almost shed a tear. I was a bit confused as to whether you were actually responding to Julio in writing and he was receiving it, or whether it was your personal response in the piece. What I really like in a piece is good sound. It would have been useful to use sounds for context as to where you were physically when you read these letters.

Gloria, just remember that people grow and change and that time heals all wounds. Good luck to you and your brother.